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  1. Posted: December 14, 2019In: Examples, Romance

    Minutes after a woman flies solo into motherhood with artificial insemination, she meets Mr. Right who thinks she’s his dream girl–but isn’t ready for children.

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    Added an answer on December 21, 2019 at 11:34 am

    Using my as-yet paid-for artistic license, this is what i would have done with this: "Despite knowing he was the backup plan for the love of his love, a forlorn man is horrified to realize after helping her get pregnant she just met her Mr. Right, and is determined to win her heart at all costs." ThRead more

    Using my as-yet paid-for artistic license, this is what i would have done with this:

    “Despite knowing he was the backup plan for the love of his love, a forlorn man is horrified to realize after helping her get pregnant she just met her Mr. Right, and is determined to win her heart at all costs.”

    This tracks to a differing place but offers a ramped up plot line.

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  2. Posted: December 19, 2019In: Horror

    When his devout daughter is possessed by the spirits of two revengeful children in order to exact revenge on their remorseless nurse, an accused and suspended priest must pull himself together and exorcise her before she kills the nurse- who happens to be his wife.

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    Added an answer on December 21, 2019 at 8:07 am

    I like this concept and think I have seen either the movie that provoked it or one similar.? There are areas of easy trimming, and differing tangents to take, but one such take might be the following, which leaves the priest's battle less articulated since it appears only a tangent to the central thRead more

    I like this concept and think I have seen either the movie that provoked it or one similar.? There are areas of easy trimming, and differing tangents to take, but one such take might be the following, which leaves the priest’s battle less articulated since it appears only a tangent to the central theme. It *could* be far more involved but that would be a differing script.

    If this were mine, I would tie the priest’s wayward state to his inner struggle with the unacknowledged awareness of his wife’s true nature, but.. that is complicated.

    “A wayward priest’s daughter is possessed by the spirits of two children who seek to kill their evil nurse, forcing him to seek redemption in time to exorcise his daughter, only to discover the evil nurse is also his wife.”

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  3. Posted: December 9, 2019In: Horror

    When a demonic book is brought into a college couple home, the couple must find the source of there internal struggles before they become its next victim.

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    Added an answer on December 13, 2019 at 4:36 am

    I like the premise and can see some of the scenes already, but trying to steer away from Star Trek references: "An academic couple's dark secrets attract the even darker energy of an ancient book lurking in the college library, and the unwitting pair must resolve their past before the book swallowsRead more

    I like the premise and can see some of the scenes already, but trying to steer away from Star Trek references:

    “An academic couple’s dark secrets attract the even darker energy of an ancient book lurking in the college library, and the unwitting pair must resolve their past before the book swallows their very existence.”

    I refer to “Day of the Dove” (1968), a classic Star Trek episode that strikes many chords.

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