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  1. Posted: August 4, 2016In: SciFi

    A struggling college student, plagued by his current state of being, discovers a device called the “God Helmet” and becomes the test subject for his Professor’s experiment.

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    Can I ask WHERE y'all are reading that the God Helmet makes someone omnipotent? And how is 'plagued by' too vague, while anxious or lack of self-esteem is presumed to be evocative? Y'all can picture anxiety? And where does 'meek' figure into 'plagued by' - another assumption. There is nothing that sRead more

    Can I ask WHERE y’all are reading that the God Helmet makes someone omnipotent? And how is ‘plagued by’ too vague, while anxious or lack of self-esteem is presumed to be evocative? Y’all can picture anxiety? And where does ‘meek’ figure into ‘plagued by’ – another assumption. There is nothing that suggests the college student is meek.

    And don’t even get me started on ‘justice to the underprivileged.’ There is ZERO in that logline to suggest that narrative.

    If something is vague it’s not exactly helpful to fill it with your own assumptions and expectations. I believe that’s the opposite of what a Mentor -lol- does.

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  2. Posted: August 4, 2016In: Noir

    When a shy guy uses his lighter for the first time while talking to a pretty girl at a house party with dim lighting and strong winds outside the house, he must make a choice: is it lit, or isn’t it?

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    Added an answer on August 4, 2016 at 2:33 pm

    Oh, it's lit!

    Oh, it’s lit!

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