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  1. Posted: February 16, 2018In: Drama

    A young ex basketball player finds himself falling in love with his best friend, but being feared to hurt her due to his post-traumatic stress disorder, he must learn to cope in order to move forward with her before he lose her for good.

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    Added an answer on February 16, 2018 at 1:17 pm

    I think this logline needs to include why the main character has PTSD.As an example:Two years after witnessing the murder of his mother, a young man falls in love with his best friend.?Diagnosed?with PTSD, he must find a way to live with the past and not let love pass him by.I don't think "ex-basketRead more

    I think this logline needs to include why the main character has PTSD.

    As an example:

    Two years after witnessing the murder of his mother, a young man falls in love with his best friend.?Diagnosed?with PTSD, he must find a way to live with the past and not let love pass him by.

    I don’t think “ex-basketball player” is necessary to include unless, besides the love aspect, his second goal is to start playing basketball again.

    It’s the PTSD experience that gives him an identity not the fact he used to play basketball. (As in, he’s “the guy who experienced…whatever trauma” not “the guy who once played basketball”.)

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