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  1. Posted: October 27, 2016In: Thriller

    When a researcher creates a technology that can see anything from the last twenty four hours, a former FBI profiler must find him before the private assassins of a corrupt politician he exposed.

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    Added an answer on October 29, 2016 at 8:32 pm

    There were some movies which have multiple characters and various POV. However, I still believe that we should establish a protagonist at whom audience can sympathize since the very beginning. We could and should develop story background for other roles, too, but if the weigh of the story is distribRead more

    There were some movies which have multiple characters and various POV.

    However, I still believe that we should establish a protagonist at whom audience
    can sympathize since the very beginning.

    We could and should develop story background for other roles, too, but if the weigh
    of the story is distributed towards multiple characters, I think it would only confuse
    tire the audience.

    So, a heavier concentration on one main protagonist must still be present. If the scientist
    is the main character, then the profiler shouldn’t be mentioned as another Subject. He must
    be put as object.

    “When a researcher creates a technology that can see anything from the last twenty four
    hours, he must escape from the pursue by agents hired by a corrupt politician to kidnap him,
    while he is accompanied only by a retired FBI profiler.”

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