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A Estranged Father is kidnapped by his business partner in NYC, He must escape to reconcile with his kids or die regarding in a small old apartment.
I just have some questions and food for thought, not necessarily to include?in the logline but about the plot which may inform the reworking of the logline... * I wouldn't have the word 'estranged' as the second word or as a description of the main character. It seems out of place here, (but I underRead more
I just have some questions and food for thought, not necessarily to include?in the logline but about the plot which may inform the reworking of the logline…
* I wouldn’t have the word ‘estranged’ as the second word or as a description of the main character. It seems out of place here, (but I understand that you are trying to set up the fact that the man has issues with his kids).
See less* Why is the father kidnapped by his business partner? Does the business partner have any connection to the father’s kids and why he is estranged?
* He needs to escape regardless whether he needs to reconcile with his kids or not, however, is he racing against time? Does he have a small window of opportunity to see his kids and if he doesn’t do it in that time then all will be lost?