1. Posted: August 22, 2021In:

    France 1965. A writer, at the treshold of death, battles his best friend and critics to win the Nobel Prize.

    William Penpusher

    Thanks for your suggestion. The Best.

    Thanks for your suggestion.

    The Best.

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  2. Posted: August 14, 2021In:

    In France, an extremely gifted, aging, and seriously ill writer, supported by a female student, starts his last desperate battle against the critics and his best friend to achieve the global recognition.

    William Penpusher

    Thanks. The writer (my protaganist), 65, suffers from asthma and heart issues - I would say: he's at the treshold of death. Both his best friend and the critics are against him. I don't think I have to reveal their motivation in a logline. Please compare: "A former super-actor battles his ego, familRead more

    Thanks.

    The writer (my protaganist), 65, suffers from asthma and heart issues – I would say:
    he’s at the treshold of death.

    Both his best friend and the critics are against him.
    I don’t think I have to reveal their motivation in a logline. Please compare:

    “A former super-actor battles his ego, family, and cast while putting play intended
    to revive his career.” (“Birdman”).

    Finally my new version (V3):

    France 1965. A writer, at the treshold of death, battles his best friend and critics to win the Nobel Prize.

    Thanks again.

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  3. Posted: August 12, 2021In:

    At the threshold of death, an obscure, nonconformist, bisexual writer settles down with a female student on the French Riviera to fight the last merciless battle for his life and global recognition.

    William Penpusher

    Thanks. My protagonist is a real character who received a Formentor Prix (the second literary prize after the Nobel at that time) in 1967. His work was translated into 30 languages.

    Thanks.

    My protagonist is a real character who received a Formentor Prix (the second literary prize after the Nobel at that time) in 1967. His work was translated into 30 languages.

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