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  1. Posted: November 12, 2015In: Thriller

    After his wife commits adultery , a proud South African farmer feels ostracized by his community and forms a codependent relationship with a French anarchistic cult couple that eventually turn violent on him and his family, but his fight for survival comes at tragic cost and he is confronted by the depths of his shame.

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    Added an answer on November 13, 2015 at 2:52 pm

    He gets married to a? new woman? at the midpoint that totally upsets the French and this escalates the conflict.

    He gets married to a? new woman? at the midpoint that totally upsets the French and this escalates the conflict.

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  2. Posted: November 12, 2015In: Thriller

    After his wife commits adultery , a proud South African farmer feels ostracized by his community and forms a codependent relationship with a French anarchistic cult couple that eventually turn violent on him and his family, but his fight for survival comes at tragic cost and he is confronted by the depths of his shame.

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    Added an answer on November 12, 2015 at 8:21 pm

    Thanks man! I'm learning a lot on this platform. ;) His Wound:? shame caused by? the infidelity and very strict parents His Lie: he is unacceptable/flawed and inferior His Want : to belong ( he does this by withdrawing out of town and latching on the french couple) His Need:? face his shame The filmRead more

    Thanks man! I’m learning a lot on this platform. 😉

    His Wound:? shame caused by? the infidelity and very strict parents
    His Lie: he is unacceptable/flawed and inferior
    His Want : to belong ( he does this by withdrawing out of town and latching on the french couple)
    His Need:? face his shame

    The film is actually a tragic true story. The farmer? can’t get true belonging and self respect before he faces his shame(inferiority complex)? and keep making impulsive naive? decisions to please people(co dependency) – including this crazy french couple who has in a sense become his safe haven ( where he finds belonging/ a fresh start outside his own community that shunned him). He basically puts everyone in danger in the process including himself and his NEW wife? ( who only wants his money) when the french go on a killing spree after he tries to evict them off his farm. In the end he actually sells this farm which was in the family for 200 years because he is ruined by the? deep shameful mess he got himself and others into.? When he drives out of town, never to return,? he gets a? true self revelation, how self destructive his shame is , causing him to? pretty much loose everything he cares about.

    Super tricky to condense this!!

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  3. Posted: November 11, 2015In: Comedy

    When a embittered copy writer curses her job and wishes that all marketing noise, including all text to disappear, she is stunned when she notices products, billboards, signage, newspapers and even the internet turned into void blocks of empty color causing global chaos.

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    Added an answer on November 12, 2015 at 2:53 am

    When a embittered copy writer publicly curses her job, wishing that all marketing noise and text disappears, she is aggressively persecuted by advertising agencies after billboards, products, newspapers as well as the internet start to disappear into void blocks of empty color causing global chaos,Read more

    When a embittered copy writer publicly curses her job, wishing that all marketing noise and text disappears, she is aggressively persecuted by advertising agencies after billboards, products, newspapers as well as the internet start to disappear into void blocks of empty color causing global chaos, but she sticks to her guns and attempts to prove that her job is no longer relevant.

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