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  1. Posted: April 13, 2019In: Thriller

    A rich, successful doctor with a debilitating sex addiction becomes entangled in kinky and increasingly dangerous power games with his sexy psychiatrist.

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    Added an answer on April 13, 2019 at 10:07 pm

    This gets my attention and sounds interesting for a movie concept. According to the rules of writing loglines that I see posted on here though, there is no inciting element listed. I guess there needs to be some kind of event mentioned in the logline that begins this conflict. I hope that makes sensRead more

    This gets my attention and sounds interesting for a movie concept. According to the rules of writing loglines that I see posted on here though, there is no inciting element listed. I guess there needs to be some kind of event mentioned in the logline that begins this conflict. I hope that makes sense.

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  2. Posted: April 11, 2019In: Comedy

    A crazy caveman from a forest tribe accidentally ends up in 18th century London, he must find a way to get back home before he becomes an exhibit at the museum of history.

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    Added an answer on April 13, 2019 at 4:06 am

    I'm not good at this because I've just started, but I think first, the "crazy" caveman throws me. What defines a crazy caveman? My next thought is that this sounds like something I have seen before.? I think there needs to be something a little more original to hook me.

    I’m not good at this because I’ve just started, but I think first, the “crazy” caveman throws me. What defines a crazy caveman? My next thought is that this sounds like something I have seen before.? I think there needs to be something a little more original to hook me.

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  3. Posted: April 12, 2019In: SciFi

    When a struggling video game designer begins seeing his characters in real life, he suspects he?s already playing a game of his own creation and begins searching for patterns to help complete and escape the game.

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    Added an answer on April 13, 2019 at 3:54 am

    I am new at this so if this isn't very clear, I'm sorry. I think your concept is really interesting, but I think your logline is wordy. I think you can phrase it a lot more succinctly.

    I am new at this so if this isn’t very clear, I’m sorry. I think your concept is really interesting, but I think your logline is wordy. I think you can phrase it a lot more succinctly.

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