1. Posted: June 21, 2016In:

    An overworked suburban mother and professional hit women, reaches breaking point as she struggles to juggle the work life balance.

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    I just want? you to continue working on this idea. It needs work as is, however the idea of stressed? fenle? hitman has some bite to it.??????? Sort of like Mr. and Mrs. Smith. Maybe a dark comedy? You know, so many loglines here are just farfetched. Filled with ghosts, and zombies, and? aliens. ...Read more

    I just want? you to continue working on this idea.

    It needs work as is, however the idea of stressed? fenle? hitman has some
    bite to it.??????? Sort of like Mr. and Mrs. Smith.

    Maybe a dark comedy?

    You know, so many loglines here are just farfetched. Filled with ghosts, and
    zombies, and? aliens. …. blah, blah, blah.

    In my opinion, the concept at least has merit.

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  2. Posted: June 6, 2016In:

    An interstellar hitman is forced together with an intrepid, young archeologist in a race against a ruthless mercenary group to find the legendary fortune of an ancient civilization.

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    Lots of problems, beginning with the akward wording.? Better to say, hitman and archeologist.

    Lots of problems, beginning with the akward wording.? Better to say, hitman and archeologist.

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  3. Posted: June 6, 2016In:

    A lawsuit for his wife?s injury offers a homeless group leader a ticket out? until a member of his flock threatens to testify. Now he must resort to extreme measure to stop him.

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    I agree. Can you imagine a producer spending millions to produce a movie about homeless people, unless they have really compelling transitions. Better to make it about ordinary people.

    I agree. Can you imagine a producer spending millions to produce a movie about homeless people, unless they have really compelling transitions.
    Better to make it about ordinary people.

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