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  1. Posted: June 21, 2016In: Drama

    An overworked suburban mother and professional hit women, reaches breaking point as she struggles to juggle the work life balance.

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    Added an answer on July 5, 2016 at 9:25 am

    I just want? you to continue working on this idea. It needs work as is, however the idea of stressed? fenle? hitman has some bite to it.??????? Sort of like Mr. and Mrs. Smith. Maybe a dark comedy? You know, so many loglines here are just farfetched. Filled with ghosts, and zombies, and? aliens. ...Read more

    I just want? you to continue working on this idea.

    It needs work as is, however the idea of stressed? fenle? hitman has some
    bite to it.??????? Sort of like Mr. and Mrs. Smith.

    Maybe a dark comedy?

    You know, so many loglines here are just farfetched. Filled with ghosts, and
    zombies, and? aliens. …. blah, blah, blah.

    In my opinion, the concept at least has merit.

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  2. Posted: June 6, 2016In: Thriller

    In 1951,a physicist tasked with designing an early thermonuclear bomb, has a lesbian affair with her young lab assistant.She’s determined to complete the difficult design while struggling for survival when she discovers her lover to be a ruthless Soviet spy

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    Added an answer on June 6, 2016 at 7:29 pm

    See? if this strikes a more positive chord.? Sorry about the punctuation,? lost something in cut and paste.

    See? if this strikes a more positive chord.? Sorry about the punctuation,? lost something in cut and paste.

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  3. Posted: June 6, 2016In: SciFi

    An interstellar hitman is forced together with an intrepid, young archeologist in a race against a ruthless mercenary group to find the legendary fortune of an ancient civilization.

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    Added an answer on June 6, 2016 at 1:34 pm

    Lots of problems, beginning with the akward wording.? Better to say, hitman and archeologist.

    Lots of problems, beginning with the akward wording.? Better to say, hitman and archeologist.

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