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Posted: February 20, 20202020-02-20T22:42:52+10:00 2020-02-20T22:42:52+10:00In: Thriller

An airline crew smuggling a $2 million diamond on board begins to get murdered one by one. [Title: Fight or Flight}

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    1. BeyondVision Penpusher
      2020-02-21T09:38:20+10:00Added an answer on February 21, 2020 at 9:38 am

      Think about what makes this different than any other smuggling film. That’s what I would want to hear in the logline.

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    2. LingeringThoughts Penpusher
      2020-02-21T23:49:11+10:00Added an answer on February 21, 2020 at 11:49 pm

      I like the short, simple style of this logline, but I would agree with the last reviewer that it needs a little more personality. Maybe allude to the murders, but don’t let us know so much of what will happen.

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    3. Richiev Singularity
      2020-02-22T08:37:07+10:00Added an answer on February 22, 2020 at 8:37 am

      … and what will the lead character do about this situation?

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    4. Neer Shelter Singularity
      2020-02-22T10:00:57+10:00Added an answer on February 22, 2020 at 10:00 am

      Who is the main character and why must they do whatever it is their goal so happen to be?

      Check out the ‘Formula’ tab up top for some logline basics.

       

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    5. RedRoad Logliner
      2020-02-22T21:18:49+10:00Added an answer on February 22, 2020 at 9:18 pm

      This could? be a mixed genre crime thriller with horror as the second genre. Something comes on to the plane with the diamonds. Could be a curse, a demon guardian, an alien,etc.

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