To distance himself from overbearing parents, high school freshman Michael Colantino finds himself compelled to create thoughtful hip-hop music in a world that overwhelmed with flashy and uninspired artists. Michael’s friend Harry seeks help dealing with a dishonest truck driver.

Agreed, after some thought I'm losing the hip-hop angle and have came up with following logline for the series:
"Freshmen at Chauncey Vocation High School Frank, Harry and Danny are a group of kindhearted degenerates learning to deal with life in high school."
What do you think?

Agreed, thanks for your input.

Thanks for your response! I agree that it sounds much better split up. My original thought was that I wanted to create a feel for a series in the logline of the pilot, but I see now that is not what is best.

Also, after much thought I'm going to ditch the hip-hop angle and maybe just make it a running side story.
I have came up with the following series logline:
"Freshmen at Chauncey Vocation High School Frank, Harry and Danny are a group of kindhearted degenerates learning to deal with life in high school"

What do you think?