Revenge of the Cats
IvyEight6Penpusher
A bacheior must race against time to stop his apartment being invaded from a pair of talking cats.
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So what is he doing to do about it? That’s what the logline should tell us.
For what it’s worth, I like the idea of his depression being represented visually by these two talking cats. That’s interesting!
The logline sets up a situation for a plot. But it doesn’t deliver a plot. See the guidelines under “The Formula” at the top of the web page for guidelines on how to formulate a logline so that it includes a plot.
It’s revised.
“Must race against time to” confuses me, because I have no idea what the rush is… I’d rather see “must stop talking cats from invading his home”. Also, is there anything that sets this concern off? “After a bachelor heats up a particularly aromatic TV dinner, a hungry bachelor must stop his apartment from being invaded by a pair of talking cats.” Would watch!