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When a Desert Merchant is tricked by the God of water and is detained to the Gods realm he must escape by using his charm and ability to sell.
Why have they been captured, and what must they do to escape. I feel you need to expand upon the action and event to create a fuller logline
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When Cara, a reclusive writer, befriends a woman who believes she’s the fictional character Jane Eyre, she finds a new sense of purpose in helping Jane navigate the complexities of modern life. When the writer’s estranged brother turns up with questions about their past, Cara must finally untangle her own truth from fiction.
Thanks for your feedback, very helpful.
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When the parents are detained by weather abroad, a man-child elder brother must take charge of his dysfunctional family’s Christmas customs and prove himself as an adult.
Very interesting premise!
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When a devoted bodyguard inherits his dead employer’s debts, he must fight a crooked businessman who was both a good friend and partner to the deceased to save his life and that of the daughter of the death boss, with whom his affair are becoming ever more prevalent.
Need to change the other deceased to either passed or died and not 2X.
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When her daughter is sent to hospital after being attacked, a mother tries to find the assailants regardless of the consequences.
A grieving mother(spy) goes all in after her innocent daughter is attacked for not wanting to join a local's gang, and this sends her on a John Wick, and Nobody Rampage until her job is complete.
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After his workaholic mom is send to work at their native island, Alex (11) will live his first summer at the gransparents village.
5 Stars Village
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A woman finds a phone connected to the future, she is tasked by people to do a series of increasingly extreme tasks in an attempt to fix their present, or it may be her latest bout of mental illness.
I love this - WILL MAKE AN AMAZING MOVIE!!!
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When failed Quarterback receives a demo tape from a failed songwriter his friends start dropping dead. Finding himself on a CIA hit list he Retreats into the Pocket, but finds Offense his only option. In striving to save his own world he may save it for all of us.
Failed 2 x. Use Ineffective, or unsuccessful, etc.
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Having the same name as a famous super-spy isn’t always easy for a 13-year old pursuing a normal childhood. But there are two things the school bullies don’t know about me: One – I am, in reality, the actual son of the iconic James Bond, and two – I’m anything but normal.
James Bond Jr. 008
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A desperate griffin fights through a horde of zombies to capture the only thing that will return his family’s honor, an immune human.
I could see this being made into a movie!
