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I meant "stakes, not "conflict", obviously...
I always advise against using the character's name in the logline, unless they are famous. Seems to be missing an "is" ("...is forced..."). It lacks conflict (what happens if she fails?), and the "boyfriend" part is irrelevant for the logline (although I can only surmise that he's really the person behind the drug operation, but that's just a guess on my part).
Needs work...
Geno Scala (sharkeatingman)- judge