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After leaving his small town in pursuing luck in L.A., reckless dreamer finds himself in a center of sex, lies and deceit, and to not become another L.A. casualty, he must now -
Dreamer is a much better word
"Small town, meets big city, gets corrupted by a downward spiral of partying and drugs" is a very standard film concept.
There is nothing wrong with the fact this basic idea has been done, it's just for your idea to work it needs a hook, something that makes it stand out.
Add a hook to the logline and it will be greatly improved.
Hope this works out for you, good luck.
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