When a good-for-nothing architect after a divorce is rejected by his 6 year-old son, he signs up for a competition to create the towns new playground and win back his sons respect.

by Justine · Logliner · 210 pts 20 views

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I changed it a bit thanks to the good advice I was given.

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Justine · Logliner · 210 pts

Ha ha! Thank you Sonja!

Sonja · Wordsmith · 370 pts

Love it, and love the previous feedback, just have to be "like that" and say that here loser would be with one o, otherwise it takes on a different meaning :)

Justine · Logliner · 210 pts

Thank you very much!

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