Penpusher
Posted: 2021-12-18T05:21:56+10:00 In:

A reluctant psychic’s near death experience reveals that soul families are trapped in karmic loops and unless she finds the strength to confront her narcissistic mother by using her psychic abilities to find their past life mistakes they will remain trapped reliving the same life and death experiences for eternity. 0 Reply Share

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    1. Penpusher

      Good concept and your logline hits the necessary beats, but imo the sentence is just a little bit hard to read. I would consider rewording and/or cleaning up everything after “unless she finds the strength”
      I also think wording like “she must” would be a little clearer and eliminate unnecessary verbage.

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