Penpusher
Posted: 2015-09-30T11:42:25+10:00 In:

When a man born with a fox tail falls in love, he must overcome his insecurities about how he looks, to win his foxy lady.

When a man born with a fox tail falls in love, he must overcome his insecurities about how he looks, to win his foxy lady.
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    6 Reviews

    1. Penpusher

      Hiya,

      I think this sounds cute, perhaps the man could be described a little more?

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    2. Penpusher

      nice use of context. I also like how you mention your characters insecurities ?in the log line.

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    3. Penpusher

      A love story is always a tear mover and heart beater, the story can be made to a feature film…

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    4. Mentor

      Hello
      Try to include a better description of “the man”.

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    5. Logliner

      Hellow White Shadow,

      I would like his “foxy lady” being a real vixen. This could be a great tale about tolerance, the feeling of superiority… I like the idea of the hero disturbed by his human appearance when he falls in love with a vixen…

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    6. Logliner

      Hellow White Shadow,

      I would like his “foxy lady” being a real vixen. This could be a great tale about tolerance, the feeling of superiority… I like the idea of the hero disturbed by his human appearance when he falls in love with a vixen…

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