Penpusher
Posted: 2016-02-03T12:57:49+10:00 In:

On his way to his last practice before the championship, a famous athlete sees a car speeding towards children at bus stop, and quickly decides to ram his car into the moving vehicle preventing a tragic accident but ends up killing the driver. Now he has to deal with the aftermath or his courageous, yet hasty decision.

On his way to his last practice before the championship, a famous athlete sees a car speeding towards children at bus stop, and quickly decides to ram his car into the moving vehicle preventing a tragic accident but ends up killing the driver. Now he has to deal with the aftermath or his courageous, yet hasty decision.
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    1. Uberwriter

      Okay the story is the aftermath. ?You have given us a really strong inciting incident. ?What is the story?

      After causing a accident that saves kids but kills the driver an athlete must face a corrupt disciplinary board out to get him over a sponsorship deal gone wrong.

      This is not your story. ?But it describes some events. ?Tell us the story not a teaser. ?Try telling it from a goal point of view.

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