When a college student falls in love with wakeboarding while preparing to win the Women’s World Amateur Golf Tournament, she must decide whether to pursue a future of money and stability, or passion and uncertainty.

Good re draft of the logline, but no need to mention the character's name and the first clause is too long of a description for the inciting incident.

After the women's division is canceled in the Pro Wakeboard Tour, a young competitor must enlist the help of the previous Wakeboarding champion to train her to win the men's division.

Thanks Nir! Good suggestions...thoughts:
When Hudson Holloway learns that the Women's division in the Pro Wakeboard Tour has been canceled, she enlists the help of a banned, former champion to train her to win in the Men's division.

This concept has come along way through the logline re drafts in this thread.

The last draft, in my mind, seems to lack a cause and effect between the inciting incident - getting banned from women's golf, and the goal - bring back a women's division to the pro wakeboard tour.

One does not logically motivate the other. If how ever she were to try and help a young talent up the ranks in golf the connection is made, or conversely if she were to have been banned from wake boarding the connection will also be made.

On a second note, you specified that she wants to "...bring back?" the division, this implies that there was a women's division and then it was taken away or canceled. What if the inciting incident is just that? She was a pro wakeboarder and the woman's division was canceled, now she must take action to bring it back or else she will not be able to compete.