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(Based on my own true story) An autistic artist recognizes that as he gets older he increasingly exhibits genius level intellegence despite his decreasing ability to verbally express himself. As he begins to solve the world’s most distructive problems in his mind, ultimately will the solutions ever be accepted in time to save humans from themselves?

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Neer Shelter · Singularity · 39,985 pts ★ Accepted

Many good points made by Dkpough1 and DPG, worth studying this thread in more detail.

However, I'd like to add a few more helpful pointers to the mix. You seem to be attached to this description:? "...The world is on the verge of making technological advances that will dramatically effect everything and everyone worldwide..."

I presume you mean that scientists and organizations, worldwide, are researching and developing technologies that have the potential to wreak havoc. If this is the case, can you specify the one scientist, or one company, that's developing the most dangerous technology? This could be an inciting incident for the MC to take action - stop the technological development.

On a side note, as there is a lack of detail specified in the logline and you seem to be still developing the concept as a whole, have you considered a different medium?
Film requires you work within specific conventions, and to your admission you're still living the story, which means these conventions may not be observed in these early stages of development. Seeing as you also want the audience to grow with you as the story develops, I think this would make for a good web series. In a web seires you can explore the narrative in any way you see fit, and find an audience that would appreciate it.

geeart1 · Penpusher · 20 pts

Based on a true story in a world where technological advancements implements a A.I. system that challenges the relevance for human existence, an autistic savant uses his emotional intelligence to create a ubiquitous mobile app to protect mankind from a digital holocaust.

(To all who read this logline: I'm curious to know your opinion on whether you prefer this loosely based version of my life, or one within a medium where you could follow my true experiences as my life progresses? Thanks!)

geeart1 · Penpusher · 20 pts

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Based on a true story in a world where global technological advancements inadvertently implements A.I. technology that challenges the relevance for human existence. An autistic savant understanding the impending threats, uses his emotional intelligence to create a ubiquitous mobile app in order to protect mankind from a digital holocaust.