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Posted: 2017-02-03T17:33:16+10:00 In:

With the raging fire from her grisly past illuminating and burning everything she has worked hard for, the troubled young girl embarks on a difficult journey to find healing and closure.

With the raging fire from her grisly past illuminating and burning everything she has worked hard for, the troubled young girl embarks on a difficult journey to find healing and closure.
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    2 Reviews

    1. Singularity

      Not sure what this logline means.

      You should give us a specific event in the logline and a specific goal.

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    2. Singularity

      Agreed with Richiev.

      Good loglines are made up of clear detail that describe a plot. For example “…a difficult journey…” is a generic term as it contains no plot specific detail. The descriptions you use in a logline should inform the reader enough so that he or she understand the MC will undertake a difficult journey instead of literally wording it in the logline.

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