In a world where sadness is punishable by death, and the broken-hearted must gather in secret, a singer of melancholy songs struggles to incarnate the true love he’s found in his dreams in order to escape the oppression of his waking life.

I love a struggle with the Thought-Emotion Police, too. But as the logline is currently worded, there isn't much of a struggle. The protagonist's only objective goal seems to be to indulge in escapism, rather than overthrow the oppression, liberate himself (and his fellow sufferers).

I love a struggle with the Thought-Emotion Police, too. But as the logline is currently worded, there isn't much of a struggle. The protagonist's only objective goal seems to be to indulge in escapism, rather than overthrow the oppression, liberate himself (and his fellow sufferers).

I love a struggle against the Thought Police. Please give us a clue about the true love, what she does, will she betray him. any moral weakness in either main character would add a dimension of humanity and interest.