A sleek female sports agent struggles to get her papers from the evils of this world and beyond.

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THE AWAKENING IN LA

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I also think it's to abstract. It's better that you specify what you mean by the evils of this world.

Good luck!

I'm not sure there is enough to go on with this logline.

Why does a sports agent need papers? What papers? What will happen if she doesn't get her papers? How do you get papers from the evils of this world and beyond?

With a little clarification the readers will have a better understanding of what this story is about and help you sell you story.

Hope that helped, good luck with this!

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