THE AWAKENING IN LA
A sleek female sports agent struggles to get her papers from the evils of this world and beyond.
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I’m not sure there is enough to go on with this logline.
Why does a sports agent need papers? What papers? What will happen if she doesn’t get her papers? How do you get papers from the evils of this world and beyond?
With a little clarification the readers will have a better understanding of what this story is about and help you sell you story.
Hope that helped, good luck with this!
I also think it’s to abstract. It’s better that you specify what you mean by the evils of this world.
Good luck!