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Posted: February 21, 20182018-02-21T19:25:52+10:00 2018-02-21T19:25:52+10:00In: Adventure

As the sun rises on a quiet morning, a lone wolf ventures through a charred wasteland in search of signs of life.

As the sun rises on a quiet morning, a lone wolf ventures through a charred wasteland in search of signs of life.
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    1. CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
      2018-02-21T19:40:04+10:00Added an answer on February 21, 2018 at 7:40 pm

      That?s a cool opening shot, I can?t help as I don?t know what the story is going to be.

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    2. Richiev Singularity
      2018-02-22T08:14:09+10:00Added an answer on February 22, 2018 at 8:14 am

      You have described a scene not a story

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    3. Neer Shelter Singularity
      2018-02-22T09:02:16+10:00Added an answer on February 22, 2018 at 9:02 am

      Agreed with the others.

      Check out the ‘Formula’ tab on the top bar for more information about loglines. Also, feel free to study other posts on this site, there are many examples of different kinds of loglines you can learn from.

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    4. Neer Shelter Singularity
      2018-02-23T12:10:36+10:00Added an answer on February 23, 2018 at 12:10 pm

      Considering the second version, where is the conflict or dramatic need going to come from ? it?s wild versus wild, or in other words, a documentary. Dramatic conflict needs an out of the ordinary event that motivates a flawed main character to achieve a goal, however, in this concept you have an animal following its survival instincts during a natural disaster. You would need to anthropomorphize the wolf to make him or her a character and then you?ll require a dramatic need to make the story work. Check out Ice Age as a good example.

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