Raani a 3rd grade school going girl from a poor family who always lies to her friends about her father, his job outside the country , and his soon expected return to home ; accepts the reality that her father is dead , and he will not come back ever.

The logline suggests a story with a moving human predicament.

However, as written, it seems to give away the ending, how the poor girl’s predicament is ultimately resolved: she realizes and accepts that he’s dead, never coming back. One of the rules of writing a logline is not to give away the ending.

Or realizing that her father is dead may be the jumping off point for the rest of the story. I’m not sure.

What is the story really about? What she must do after she realizes her father’s dead? Or how she evades reality with lies and self-delusion until harsh reality forces her to deal with the truth? I suggest the logline needs a polish to clarify the story line.