When he get caught up messing with his business distributor girl, a young upcoming producer must find a way to withstand his business from failing and the woman he fell in love with.
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"When he discovers the woman he's fallen for is his New partner's ex, an up-and-coming producer must..."
youngDolla;
so I read your detail,
It's great that his business partner (the distributor guy) would have problem with him fooling around his ex, especially after she dumped him!
Still, the Inciting Incident shouldn't be "the distributor finds out" but when the producer falls for her knowing she's ex of his business partner
Then midpoint can take care of distributor finding out his ex with the producer
So another version could be something like:
"After falling for the girl who dumped his associate, a producer must keep it a secret or risk business he grinded his nights for"
Best wishes for your project
'After getting in trouble intimidating his female-distributor, the young promising producer must retrieve his business and his personal life.'
If above mentioned line describes what you meant, then, this needs more work. You can come up with better confrontation. A hedonistic behavior is not an ideal major-conflict.