A young woman imprisoned in Greenland must prepare for her eventual release while at the same time dealing with the issue of guilt.

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Maybe a few questions could be answered and more interest aroused if we knew what she was guilty of.

New life on the outside

What DPG said, the concept lacks the basic elements that make a plot.

"?young woman?" is a very weak description of a main character as it is too generic and doesn't imply a flaw for her to overcome.

Dealing with something is not an action it is the experience of an emption, these are all too common in loglines where a writer didn't choose exactly what the character does.

What does she actually do in the story? What does she actually want?

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