Samurai
Posted: 2018-11-19T13:08:45+10:00 In:

Once infected by a neurovirus that has an AI interface, it promises to help the host survive if the host helps with the mission of it’s own: to kill the other AI Neuroviruses that threaten it’s very existence.

Once infected by a neurovirus that has an AI interface, it promises to help the host survive if the host helps with the mission of it’s own: to kill the other AI Neuroviruses that threaten it’s very existence.
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    1. Singularity

      Who is the lead character?

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    2. Samurai

      Your syntax needs a lot of cleaning. I guess your main character is the host, but you present the host in a very secondary fashion.

      The main event is obviously the virus infection, plus an AI interface that goes with it.

      The action is also missing. I guess the goal is getting rid of the virus,but we need to get a hint of the action that would lead to achieving this goal.

      When infected with an AI-possessing neurovirus (EVENT), a snarky IT developer (CHARACTER) must destroy the infected server (ACTION) before she turns into a digital zombie.

      Or something like that.

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