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When a portal opens up for demons to escape Hell, the devil’s son must go to earth to round up the demons and deliver the one who made the portal to Yahweh before He cleans up the mess, sending every demon and creature into oblivion along with the son, if he’s still on earth.
I feel like this is going have a weird 'Supernatural' type story, but hopefully, since I'm telling from a different perspective with the Devil's son as the main character, I can make the story go where I want it to.…
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During an arrest on a train, the leader must lead his team through the full speed train filled with flesh eating demons to the engine car, where they must find a way to get off the train before it crashes.
Let's try this again. I'm getting close. I can feel it.
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After getting injected with a rage serum, the injected man must use his new found abilities to stop a rich vengeful businessman from flooding the streets with his serum to destroy the city.
I'm kinda riding this one close to the vest. It's still in writing mode, but this is round one of a previous one. The motivational speaker stopping the businessman from previous logline. I took a new turn on it to…
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In order to save two missing girls, a cop must win a game of wits with the criminal who knows where they are or risk losing the girls to a dark demise. (Psychological Horror)
This is nowhere near my best work. Wow.
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After a fight with a pack of wolves, a emotionally volatile tachycardic is given superhuman senses, which places him and his girlfriend in danger from an unstoppable tyrannical businessman. (Revision 2)
This one is prepped and ready for work. I need the logline to be perfected before I can get it out there. All reviews are helpful. Thank you.
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Two down and out cops are paired as partners to take on a cartel before the cartel spreads a powerful drug that could destroy the city or risk being fired, if they survive.
This was by the seat of my pants as I wrote it. I'm still looking for the Logline used to create The Other Guys. If anyone knows where I can find it, that would be awesome. Thanks a bunch.
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A young impressionable man is called by a manipulative enchantress to rule a kingdom until he finds out how the previous ruler died and investigates everyone, thinking how he might be next and what it would mean for the kingdom if he dies.
This one is kind of wordy in my opinion. Help on consolidating it, please.
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Several years after losing his team in a mission gone wrong, a top grade elite sniper is recruited back to train a team of rising soldiers to stop a group of elite forces trying to kill a foreign politician.
I switched it to a foreign politician. It could be anything of your choosing and? I hope it makes it better and spot on. Thank you for your reviews. I need to be on here more often. Sorry for the…
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A strong teenage girl begins training at a unique academy to fight the Gods who are trying to kill her family and her.
This needs work. Like for sure. But I'm getting there. I think I know what I want this one to be.
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A man looks for how his brother died, only to find it in the deadliest game known to man, a deadly version of soccer, which he plans to win become unstable when he finds the truth about his brother.
(I revised)
I feel like I'm missing the cause and effect. Cause: He's looking for how his brother died. Effect: He gets caught up in the same game that killed his brother. I think I just created two causes and no effect.
