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"When he is forced to transport the dead body of a child, an out of work man must..." (Then tell us what he must do)
Transport as in drive the body from the hospital or morgue to a funeral home? Or, transport as in an illegal activity of some sort?? If the former then I'm not sure what the story is - transport the body job done. If the latter, why would he agree to do the job? And why would the audience care about a character who agreed to work for such horrible people?
Other than that, I would say the concept needs an event to compel the main character to need to take the job - other wise, it's not clear why he MUST do what he does.