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When his liquor licence is stripped due to unpaid bills, a neurotic publican must win the local fishing competition’s cash prize, but when he realises he is competing against his abusive father, he must control his manic behaviour to out-fish him and save the pub he calls home.
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This is a strong theme and something definitely worth exploring. Looking at the second draft of the logline in the comments, it mentions her parents "have other plans for her". In a logline we want specific visual events that an…