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on Leaving her shattered acting dream behind, a desperate woman finds a dead body in a motel. To escape the local police chief, she poses as an FBI agent who has disappeared with $10 million. How long can she keep up this lie before the police, the FBI or the local mafia catch her?

Why is she desperate? The causation between finding the dead body and needing to escape from the police is missing a link. We need to understand what went wrong when finding this dead body that prompts the actions for the…