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PhilaniPenpusher
Posted: March 8, 20192019-03-08T14:59:00+10:00 2019-03-08T14:59:00+10:00In: Drama

After learning that their recently deceased father did not make a will regarding his opulent mansion, the three siblings who distanced themselves from their hot- tempered father begin a heated dispute over the inheritance, but a revelation that that their father bequeathed the estate to his unknown illegitimate daughter he fathered with a former prostitute turn their lives upside down, relationships fall apart as betrayal, greed and desperation ensue.

After learning that their recently deceased father did not make a will regarding his opulent mansion, the three siblings who distanced themselves from their hot- tempered father begin a heated dispute over the inheritance, but a revelation that that their father bequeathed the estate to his unknown illegitimate daughter he fathered with a former prostitute turn their lives upside down, relationships fall apart as betrayal, greed and desperation ensue.
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    1. Redshoes Penpusher
      2019-03-08T15:13:28+10:00Added an answer on March 8, 2019 at 3:13 pm

      I would suggest: “When three estranged siblings learn their late father has left his substantial estate to his secret illegitimate daughter, they must…?? Maybe, work together to get their just deserts; which might be different than they had imagined.

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    2. Richiev Singularity
      2019-03-08T16:26:05+10:00Added an answer on March 8, 2019 at 4:26 pm

      Who is the lead character? Because right now none of the characters seems to be likable.
      Whose eyes do we see the story through and why are we pulling for one of the characters to succeed?

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