1. Posted: December 11, 2021In:

    A reluctant psychic has a near death experience and learns that karmic strands will continue to hold her and everyone she knows trapped in the same life experiences for eternity unless she can overcome her narcissistic mother’s attempts to keep her powerless and is willing to use her abilities to see the past, present and future to finally free everyone’s souls.

    songo marcel Penpusher

    Great idea but I think you need to simplify your logline so that it can easily be understood by the public. It's a little bit complex and hard to buy in from the first look.

    Great idea but I think you need to simplify your logline so that it can easily be understood by the public. It’s a little bit complex and hard to buy in from the first look.

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  2. Posted: April 12, 2021In:

    Forcing the FBI to reopen her sister’s cold case by altering a crime scene, a grief-stricken twin must contend with a cynical Special Agent and ‘The Bayou Butcher’, furious his retirement has been disturbed.

    Odie Samurai

    Leaning towards: “A twin hellbent on solving the brutal murder of his sister puts himself in The Bayou Butcher crosshairs when new evidence forces the FBI to reopen the cold case.” Take care.

    Leaning towards:
    “A twin hellbent on solving the brutal murder of his sister puts himself in The Bayou Butcher crosshairs when new evidence forces the FBI to reopen the cold case.”

    Take care.

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  3. Posted: April 10, 2021In:

    An uninventive children’s author, whose supposed dreams have long been documented in his bedside journal by a mysterious ghostwriter, wakes up to a shockingly blank journal upon the release of his debut novel.

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    Odie Samurai

    Fascinating premise. In this version, you can use the “OMG the journal is blank/gone” as an ACT II plot twist. Leaning towards: “An uninventive child author sourcing stories from a mystical self-writing dream journal sets out to clear his name when his debut novel is accused of plagiarism.” Make thiRead more

    Fascinating premise. In this version, you can use the “OMG the journal is blank/gone” as an ACT II plot twist.
    Leaning towards:
    “An uninventive child author sourcing stories from a mystical self-writing dream journal sets out to clear his name when his debut novel is accused of plagiarism.”

    Make this yours, take care

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