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  1. Posted: October 21, 2019In: Examples, War

    Four soldiers have one day to exploit the chaos of the 1991 Gulf War to steal gold from Iraq that Iraq stole from Kuwait.

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    Added an answer on October 21, 2019 at 10:53 pm

    mikepedley85:Well, the logline says they're stealing the gold.? If it was an authorized military operation, then they wouldn't be stealing, would they?? They would be doing it to restore the gold to its rightful owner (Kuwait).? Further, if it was an authorized action, the military wouldn't send merRead more

    mikepedley85:

    Well, the logline says they’re stealing the gold.? If it was an authorized military operation, then they wouldn’t be stealing, would they?? They would be doing it to restore the gold to its rightful owner (Kuwait).? Further, if it was an authorized action, the military wouldn’t send merely 4 soldiers to recover a fortune in gold.? Heck, they’d send at least a battalion (1-2,000 men)? or maybe a brigade (2-5,000 men) backed up by air support.

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  2. Posted: October 6, 2019In: Examples

    When his working class father forbids him to take a ballet class, a young boy with a passion for dancing secretly takes private lessons to audition for a slot at the Royal Ballet school.

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    Added an answer on October 12, 2019 at 12:16 pm

    How is the goal description different from your original post? Regardless, it's not the twists and turns of the plot that you need to describe, instead, it's the end goal. How he gets to the goal (whether on his own volition or through someone else's encouragement) is less important.

    How is the goal description different from your original post?

    Regardless, it’s not the twists and turns of the plot that you need to describe, instead, it’s the end goal. How he gets to the goal (whether on his own volition or through someone else’s encouragement) is less important.

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  3. Posted: August 26, 2019In: Coming of Age, Examples

    When a talented teenage pianist wins a scholarship to Julliard, he must convince his parents, outlaw militant radicals, to let him come out of hiding and join the normal world.

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    Added an answer on October 6, 2019 at 11:00 am

    It's established in Act 1 of the movie, that he has a practice board and that his mother taught him the piano.??? Every time they move, they assume a new identities and blend into the local community.? The protagonist and his brother attend public schools. (The movie is set in the 80's when homeschoRead more

    It’s established in Act 1 of the movie, that he has a practice board and that his mother taught him the piano.??? Every time they move, they assume a new identities and blend into the local community.? The protagonist and his brother attend public schools. (The movie is set in the 80’s when homeschooling was not a popular option.? In fact, at that time, it was still wasn’t legal in most states.)

    The fictional world of the movie, that? his parents were militant activists in the 60’s resonated with the zeitgeist of the 80’s, when militant activists of the 60’s were mellowing out as they entered middle age, had families, bought property;? they wanted to live normal lives.? But there were still some –like the protagonist’s parents– who were still true believers in their radical ideas and who had to hide out because of lawless deeds for which they could still be arrested and go to prison.

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