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When her country gets overrun by the Huns, a Chinese teenager girl steals the conscription order from her sick father and dresses up as a boy to fight for the army, but if her secret gets revealed she will face the death penalty. (Mulan 1998)
The logline doesn't reveal WHY the teenager wants to fight the invaders, but that will determine the strength of her motivation and whether the reader will empathize with her. The situation could lead to an action-packed adventure if we have a heroine that readers can identify with.
The logline doesn’t reveal WHY the teenager wants to fight the invaders, but that will determine the strength of her motivation and whether the reader will empathize with her. The situation could lead to an action-packed adventure if we have a heroine that readers can identify with.
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I don't want to live it. I don't want to see it. But it decently structured, right?
I don’t want to live it. I don’t want to see it.
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A bogus spiritualist and an amateur actor hope to con a wealthy woman out of $10,000 by locating her sole heir ? a nephew given up for adoption under shady circumstances ? but find they are in deep water as the nephew turns out to be a kidnapper who?d rather not be found
This one is intriguing. But it doesn’t quite highlight the stakes enough. The nephew doesn’t want to be found right? So is he himself a much harder core criminal, meaning the fake spiritualist and the actor have bitten off more than they can chew and now are faced with life threatening retaliation?Read more
This one is intriguing. But it doesn’t quite highlight the stakes enough. The nephew doesn’t want to be found right? So is he himself a much harder core criminal, meaning the fake spiritualist and the actor have bitten off more than they can chew and now are faced with life threatening retaliation? Or perhaps the nephew is even more of a cunning criminal than they are, and he outwits them at their own game. Maybe the nephew is an undercover cop and they blow his cover. There are tons of ways this could go. I think some hint of the direction of your movie will be helpful in the logline.
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