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  1. Posted: December 25, 2022In: Examples

    “When she gets a scholarship to an art school, quirky high schooler tries to convince her overprotective family she’s pregnant, so she will be ‘sent away to her aunts’ in order to, in reality, go to the art school in New York.”

    JohnnyD Penpusher
    Added an answer on July 2, 2023 at 5:24 am

    It’s a good start. You could include a reference to “sexist male dominated culture of the sixties” in the longline. If the character arc you want to show includes the protagonist becoming more self motivated, grounded, etc, then we would need to understand better the stakes of her failure to take thRead more

    It’s a good start. You could include a reference to “sexist male dominated culture of the sixties” in the longline. If the character arc you want to show includes the protagonist becoming more self motivated, grounded, etc, then we would need to understand better the stakes of her failure to take this action. Like, if she doesn’t tell this lie, she will be married off in an arranged marriage, and lose her one chance at pursuing her life dream of being an artist. Or you could make it more interesting perhaps by making the aunt be “in” on her scheme. The aunt may be a mentor figure who herself has missed out on her dreams in life, perhaps the only person who believes in the protagonist and demonstrates unconditional love. The aunt can achieve joy in life, despite her own life regrets, by helping the protagonist and covering for her with her overprotective family.

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  2. Posted: November 23, 2022In: Examples

    What’s wrong with these loglines? I can only view three at a time

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on November 23, 2022 at 8:02 am

    Click the "Generator" link at the top, then the "Logline It!" logo to the left to regenerate the listings. FYI: Although I believe this is a known issue, you can submit via the "Contact" link.

    Click the “Generator” link at the top, then the “Logline It!” logo to the left to regenerate the listings.
    FYI: Although I believe this is a known issue, you can submit via the “Contact” link.

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  3. Posted: September 6, 2022In: Examples

    When a willful engineer gets into an accident on her first space mission, she has to learn to let go of both her past and her fears so that she can make it back to earth alive.

    Rodallex Penpusher
    Added an answer on September 6, 2022 at 4:47 pm

    Gravity. Good work. I think being more specific might help? What do you think? When an engineer who has lost her daughter experiences a catastrophic accident on her first space mission, she has to regain the will to live in order to make it back to earth alive.

    Gravity. Good work. I think being more specific might help? What do you think?

    When an engineer who has lost her daughter experiences a catastrophic accident on her first space mission, she has to regain the will to live in order to make it back to earth alive.

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