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When being accused of cheating on who wants to be a millionaire, a young man from the slum must tell his life story to prove his innocence.
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See lessWhen his son is kidnapped, an overprotective father must go on a long and tough journey to find his son.
This works - character, event and action are all in place! However, it would be nice to get something about why this journey is meaningful for the father - "must face his fears" or something along those lines. Also, the repetition of the word 'son' makes the read a tiny bit clunkier - try changing iRead more
This works – character, event and action are all in place! However, it would be nice to get something about why this journey is meaningful for the father – “must face his fears” or something along those lines. Also, the repetition of the word ‘son’ makes the read a tiny bit clunkier – try changing it to ‘him’ or ‘child’ the second time.
See lessWhen her sister runs away after accidentally putting their kingdom in eternal winter with her magical powers, a princess has to team up with a rugged mountain man to find her sister and stop winter.
Nice! I think it could be even better by describing the princess a bit, for example by using an adjective. What is this particular princess like, and why is it difficult for her to team up with the rugged mountain man?
Nice! I think it could be even better by describing the princess a bit, for example by using an adjective. What is this particular princess like, and why is it difficult for her to team up with the rugged mountain man?
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