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A suicidal mercenary sets out to rescue the girl he was hired to protect, the girl who gave him a reason to live, after she’s kidnapped for ransom.
No argument there. Normally the flaw or issue implies or touches on the theme or arc and here I figured it's the opposite by specifying redemption. If I were working on this idea, there would be a couple of more logline attempts.
No argument there. Normally the flaw or issue implies or touches on the theme or arc and here I figured it’s the opposite by specifying redemption. If I were working on this idea, there would be a couple of more logline attempts.
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This is posted in response to a review by Aidan Soguero in a discussion thread that referenced "The Sixth Sense".? I think the thread raises? an important question.? Should a logline ever include a 3rd Act Big Twist or Big Reveal such as the famous one in "The Sixth Sense"?The reviews and the word oRead more
This is posted in response to a review by Aidan Soguero in a discussion thread that referenced “The Sixth Sense”.? I think the thread raises? an important question.? Should a logline ever include a 3rd Act Big Twist or Big Reveal such as the famous one in “The Sixth Sense”?
The reviews and the word of mouth about the Big Twist in the “The Sixth Sense” sold a lot of movie tickets.? Everybody talked about, but most weren’t revealing it to those who hadn’t seen the movie.? “You got to see it for yourself.”
Can you sell a spec script that way?
Well, the rule of thumb has been that a logline should never contain a spoiler.? It should never give away the Big Twist at the end.
Why not?
I think the major reason is practical, a matter of psychology 101: viewers won?t settle for delayed gratification. They won?t sit through 90 minutes of yawn for 5 minutes of wow! Not in an age of multi-tasking lifestyles, of streaming video, of so many distractions, so many entertainment choices.
They want instant, or at least early, gratification. So there’s got to be a hook embedded in the 1st two acts of a script that will grab and hold viewers attention, that will entertain them from the git-go.? A hook that makes it worth their time, attention and money to go along for the ride until the Big Twist at the end.
And a logline should indicate what that hook is.
Now then. ?Does the logline posted for ?The Sixth Sense? have a story hook?? Well, the story is not just about a shrink treating a boy. The boy has a unique problem:? he sees dead people.? And the shrink has a troubled marriage after being nearly killed (planting the Big Twist without revealing it).
fwiw
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Very insightful. You're right, this parallels greatly with my current script about Roger Baldwin, and thinking in terms of the hook versus the plot could very well lead to more effective pitching.
Very insightful. You’re right, this parallels greatly with my current script about Roger Baldwin, and thinking in terms of the hook versus the plot could very well lead to more effective pitching.
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