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  1. Posted: September 29, 2018In: Examples

    When a radioactive spider’s bite grants him superpowers, a bullied teenager must use them to fight a rising super-villain.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on October 9, 2018 at 5:17 am

    Based on the popular Marvel Comics' superhero.Seven words. What else needs to be said?? The success of the comic books pre-sold the character and the movie franchise. No logline is really necessary.In the plot line for the 1st movie (2002),? the protagonist, Peter Parker, gets no respect nor love.?Read more

    Based on the popular Marvel Comics’ superhero.

    Seven words. What else needs to be said?? The success of the comic books pre-sold the character and the movie franchise. No logline is really necessary.

    In the plot line for the 1st movie (2002),? the protagonist, Peter Parker, gets no respect nor love.? Until? a spider bite inoculates him with super powers.

    And then his objective goal becomes to fight the forces of evil.

    As if!

    His?original objective goal is to use his new powers to win the prize money in a wrestling match to buy a car to woo the girl he loves.

    Only after his beloved uncle dies in an accident he realizes he could have prevented, does the protagonist, driven by guilt and remorse, start to use his powers for good,? Love will have to wait.

    And not until nearly half way? through the film does his story line (finally!) intersect with the story line of his designated nemesis, the Green Hornet. The battle between personified good and personified evil is joined.

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  2. Posted: August 22, 2018In: Examples

    When his mother sacrifices herself for his escape, a young boy must find magical body armour in order to defeat the vengeful spirits pursuing him.

    mrliteral Samurai
    Added an answer on October 8, 2018 at 10:43 pm

    Never start with "When," start with the protagonist. The conflict and the stakes are rather vague as presented. Yes it's very wordy, with lots of commas, which slow everything down, instead of being compelling, and there's no flow. A young boy must find his slain father's enchanted armour to preservRead more

    Never start with “When,” start with the protagonist. The conflict and the stakes are rather vague as presented. Yes it’s very wordy, with lots of commas, which slow everything down, instead of being compelling, and there’s no flow. A young boy must find his slain father’s enchanted armour to preserve his humanity from a supreme being determined to rid him of it. Doesn’t tell us everything but doesn’t need to, just has to be interesting enough to encourage further reading. Does make clear the protagonist, antagonist, conflict, and stakes, which is all you need. Leave the extra details for a synopsis.

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  3. Posted: October 2, 2018In: Examples

    When a drunk jingle writer repeatedly gets into bar fights, judge order him to anger management and mentor a trouble youth with a beautiful natural singing voice, if he doesn’t he will lose his income, family and go to jail.

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    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on October 4, 2018 at 6:10 am

    Uh, the logline? is posted under Examples.? That is a category reserved for composing loglines for existing movies.What existing movie does this logline refer to?

    Uh, the logline? is posted under Examples.? That is a category reserved for composing loglines for existing movies.

    What existing movie does this logline refer to?

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