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When a con man discovers he has a 14-year old daughter, he struggles to bond with her while shielding her from his criminal occupation.
Revised versions: When a lonely con man discovers he has a 14-year old daughter, he struggles to bond with her while shielding her from his criminal occupation. (25 words) That he's lonely is the character flaw that draws him into the relationship with the daughter.? It's what makes him emotionallyRead more
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When a lonely con man discovers he has a 14-year old daughter, he struggles to bond with her while shielding her from his criminal occupation.
(25 words)
That he’s lonely is the character flaw that draws him into the relationship with the daughter.? It’s what makes him emotionally vulnerable to becoming conned.? (That’s how a con works, it exploits the weakness of the mark.)
He’s also afflicted with an obsessive compulsive disorder which adds color to his character.? And explains why he’s so lonely.? ?So maybe:
When a lonely con man afflicted with OCD discovers he has a 14-year old daughter, he struggles to bond with her while shielding her from his criminal occupation.
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When an illegal immigrant kills and robs her sister, a misunderstood witch must stop the culprit before she escapes back to her own land.
Never heard of it, any good?
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Prefer dpg's. Whilst following conventional logline form (formula tab..) is great for those new to the logline game, it can dance dangerously close to conformity and hence a one way ticket to snoresville. Yes, loglines need to be clear and logical, but give the audience some cred.. when the "must(goRead more
Prefer dpg’s. Whilst following conventional logline form (formula tab..) is great for those new to the logline game, it can dance dangerously close to conformity and hence a one way ticket to snoresville. Yes, loglines need to be clear and logical, but give the audience some cred.. when the “must(goal)” is self evident, blatantly stating it in the logline can read as ameteurish/ student-y. Dpg’s tells me what I need to know without falling into that trap… and its definitely not a tagline..
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