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  1. Posted: April 30, 2017In: Examples

    A charismatic young white supremacist goes to prison, where hard experience teaches him the error of his ways. When released, he resolves to leave his former life behind — but finds to his horror that it may be too late to save his kid brother from repeating his mistakes.

    db425db Penpusher
    Added an answer on July 1, 2017 at 12:54 am

    Sounds like the film "American history X" which starred Edward Norton & Edward FurlongA former neo-nazi skinhead tries to prevent his younger brother from going down the same wrong path that he did.Which Ed Furlong does attempt to do following his release, however the story begins before he's imRead more

    Sounds like the film “American history X” which starred Edward Norton & Edward Furlong

    A former neo-nazi skinhead tries to prevent his younger brother from going down the same wrong path that he did.

    Which Ed Furlong does attempt to do following his release, however the story begins before he’s imprisoned!

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  2. Posted: April 3, 2017In: Examples

    A young police officer must prevent a bomb exploding aboard a city bus by keeping its speed above 50 mph.

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    Added an answer on June 27, 2017 at 11:23 am

    Yeah, that pretty much says it. Haha. I really don't think this screenplay would have ever been sold had it been written another way.

    Yeah, that pretty much says it. Haha. I really don’t think this screenplay would have ever been sold had it been written another way.

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  3. Posted: May 30, 2017In: Examples

    When a disillusioned hacker discovers that the world he accepts as real is a virtual simulation, he struggles to develop the power to liberate humanity from its enslavement to computers.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on June 5, 2017 at 12:48 am

    And alternative version incorporating ?the prophesy:When a disillusioned hacker discovers the world is a virtual simulation, he must struggle to fulfill the prophesy to ?become the one who liberates humanity from its enslavement to computers.(30 words)The shocking discovery is the inciting incidentRead more

    And alternative version incorporating ?the prophesy:

    When a disillusioned hacker discovers the world is a virtual simulation, he must struggle to fulfill the prophesy to ?become the one who liberates humanity from its enslavement to computers.

    (30 words)

    The shocking discovery is the inciting incident even though it ?occurs a half hour into the film and is the transition/threshold event from Act 1 to Act 2.

    Fulfilling the prophesy is the expectation placed upon him by Morpheus. ?Is Neo “The ?One”? ?That’s the dramatic question Neo and the film must answer.

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