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  1. Posted: May 13, 2021In: Examples

    As violence and corruption ensues in the underbelly of Lagos, two brothers are divided and forced to reckon with their choices as they fight to escape a life of abject poverty.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on May 15, 2021 at 7:07 am

    Nice example, and since set in the 80’s you can add a world builder then go from there as well. “Set in Nigeria during the 1980’s oil boom, …” FYI: Choose Genre “Examples” to better orientate the reader. Take care.

    Nice example, and since set in the 80’s you can add a world builder then go from there as well.
    “Set in Nigeria during the 1980’s oil boom, …”
    FYI: Choose Genre “Examples” to better orientate the reader.

    Take care.

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  2. Posted: October 9, 2015In: Examples

    When a competitive young man looses his chance to reach a famous mountain top against both bad weather as well as because of his total lack of cooperation with his team he ends up arrested when the second world war sets off during his trip and must learn to become a humble man to survive in a world totally different from anything he ever experienced before.

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    Added an answer on January 1, 2021 at 6:20 pm

    This might be me, but this reads as two loglines. Both possess a lot of information, one giving the time period and the latter describing the protagonist; yet both could be condensed into one. Especially for an epic like this movie, what is the most vital storyline and what does he get to experienceRead more

    This might be me, but this reads as two loglines. Both possess a lot of information, one giving the time period and the latter describing the protagonist; yet both could be condensed into one. Especially for an epic like this movie, what is the most vital storyline and what does he get to experience?

    PITCH: After a series of unfortunate events, a competitive, stubborn man falls short of one goal to understand and embrace humility in the presence of the future Dalai Lama. (had to reference IMdB)

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  3. Posted: December 30, 2020In: Examples

    A retired hitman seeks revenge on his former boss’s son for killing the dog his dead wife gave him.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on December 31, 2020 at 2:35 am

    Nice job!

    Nice job!

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