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An LA cab driver struggles to survive as he is forced to chauffeur a ruthless hit man to complete a series of jobs.
An L.A. cab driver is forced? to transport a hit man for a night of killing while figuring out a way to stop him.
An L.A. cab driver is forced? to transport a hit man for a night of killing while figuring out a way to stop him.
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"Not enough there to give any hook." As mentioned before on this thread, the hook is simple. It's just a deviation from the normal "Boy meets girl. They both fall in love." , because the girl doesn't. It's enough of a hook to get Hollywood interested.
“Not enough there to give any hook.”
See lessAs mentioned before on this thread, the hook is simple. It’s just a deviation from the normal “Boy meets girl. They both fall in love.” , because the girl doesn’t. It’s enough of a hook to get Hollywood interested.
When a chauvinistic advertising exec gets the ability to hear what women are really thinking, he gets a shot at outmaneuvering the woman who stole his job.
It is always good to practice writing high concept loglines (which are what they are best for) using existing films as case studies. This is an interesting one for two reasons: One, because the concept is so similar to your own and clearly an inspiration. So studying what works and doesn't with thisRead more
It is always good to practice writing high concept loglines (which are what they are best for) using existing films as case studies. This is an interesting one for two reasons:
One, because the concept is so similar to your own and clearly an inspiration. So studying what works and doesn’t with this logline and concept can be beneficial but be careful not to be too besotted with it as you don’t want it to too heavily influence your own that others associated your two ideas together.
Secondly, it is interesting because this is such an underwhelming film on it’s own merit. It has a strong concept and the cast is perfect but behind the camera and page it lacks a lot of heart — which reading your loglines I noticed too. Drop the malice in it and focus on the positivism of what you would do with the power. That’s my two cents.
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