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  1. Posted: November 17, 2016In: Examples

    After an obnoxious weatherman begrudgingly covers groundhog-day in Punxsutawney, he continuously wakes up to that same day, and must find a way out of the time-loop.

    Dkpough1 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on December 4, 2016 at 9:32 am

    It has been years since I've seen it and I don't remember it very well. Perhaps what I said isn't completely correct. Anyway, this film seems to be an anomaly as well. Maybe it would be better phrased as the goal is the driving force of the story, at least most of the time. I don't know of any excepRead more

    It has been years since I’ve seen it and I don’t remember it very well. Perhaps what I said isn’t completely correct. Anyway, this film seems to be an anomaly as well.
    Maybe it would be better phrased as the goal is the driving force of the story, at least most of the time. I don’t know of any exceptions.
    However, looking at this film, the same can be said. If he didn’t want to stop repeating the same day, there would be no story. He would just keep reliving it, over and over.

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  2. Posted: November 10, 2016In: Examples

    A highly cultivated test subject flees the clutches of a CIA organization and must determine the purpose of his program while evading capture from government officials.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on November 11, 2016 at 11:50 pm

    >>>Escaping torturous experimentation Do we know that? ?All we learn is that he had special training. ?Whatever, it's not the story hook.To my way of thinking, the first question to answer in writing ?a logline is: ?what is the story hook? ?The logline should be framed around the answer toRead more

    >>>Escaping torturous experimentation
    Do we know that? ?All we learn is that he had special training. ?Whatever, it’s not the story hook.

    To my way of thinking, the first question to answer in writing ?a logline is: ?what is the story hook? ?The logline should be framed around the answer to that question. ?Nir Shelter’s version, better than mine, ?frames the hook of “The Bourne Identity”. ?And the hook is the mystery: ?why/how did the protagonist end up floating unconscious in the Mediterranean?

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  3. Posted: October 28, 2016In: Examples

    A team of young superheroes carry out covert missions to prove that they are worthy to join the Justice League.

    Dkpough1 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on November 11, 2016 at 9:03 am

    Update: Young Justice season 3 is now in production. Network to be announced later.

    Update: Young Justice season 3 is now in production. Network to be announced later.

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