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The survival of the British Monarchy is at stake as Queen Elizabeth II struggles to deal with the death of Princess Diana, a woman she loathes but whom the public idolizes.
I believe the main character was the Helen Mirren one, it was told mostly from her point of view and she had the major change over the course of the story.Framing the story in the light of Diana's death explains the stakes better, and the logline could also benefit from mentioning?the queen's dillemRead more
I believe the main character was the Helen Mirren one, it was told mostly from her point of view and she had the major change over the course of the story.
Framing the story in the light of Diana’s death explains the stakes better, and the logline could also benefit from mentioning?the queen’s dillema:
After Princes Diana dies in a car accident, the survival of the british monarchy is at risk when Queen Elizabeth must rationalise her disdain for her daughter in law and the british people’s need for support in their time of mourning.
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The scripted story begins just after World War II breaks out. ?So I suppose that would be the inciting incident. And the script and film open in 1951 with the robbery in his home. ?And then flashback to the war period. ? Which goes to show that a logline isn't always about how the film opens, but abRead more
The scripted story begins just after World War II breaks out. ?So I suppose that would be the inciting incident.
And the script and film open in 1951 with the robbery in his home. ?And then flashback to the war period. ? Which goes to show that a logline isn’t always about how the film opens, but about the through line that drives the story.
See lessThe true story of how King George VI overcame his humiliating stammer to rally the English people in the dark days of World War II.
You make a good point, Nir Shelter. ?But the thing of it is, the abdication doesn't happen until almost 2/3 of the way through the scripted story. ?(Although, it is well-foreshadowed.) ?So how does that qualify as the inciting incident?It's seems to me that if the abdication is an inciting incident,Read more
You make a good point, Nir Shelter. ?But the thing of it is, the abdication doesn’t happen until almost 2/3 of the way through the scripted story. ?(Although, it is well-foreshadowed.) ?So how does that qualify as the inciting incident?
It’s seems to me that if the abdication is an inciting incident, it does indeed “shake up his world”, in that it sets up the supreme crisis, when Bertie is ?forced to confront his stammer head on. He’s been wrestling with it for years, now he must rise to the occasion, to the supreme crisis in his life and in the history of Great Britain with ?a radio address. ?He will either succeed or suffer humiliation and failure before an worldwide audience of millions.
But ?technically, it’s not the inciting incident for his struggle to overcome his stammer. ?The scripted story begins in media res in terms of ?his personal problem. ?He’s been struggling to overcome his stammer all his life. The inciting incident occurs when Bertie’s wife, Princess Elizabeth, solicits the help of Lionel Logue, a speech therapist. to do what no one else has been able to do. ?
Your?version puts the spotlight (and rightly so!) on the stakes, what gives the story its historical and dramatic import. ?He must achieve a personal victory in order to to rally the English people to ?national victory over?Nazi Germany.
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