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When a prominent Savannah, Georgia citizen is accused of murdering his male lover, a rude New York reporter must find out what really happened by interviewing the local residents who would prefer to hide the truth under a fa?ade of money, booze, and lovely manners.
Not bad! Certainly enough for a story is there. If you got a professional review, they would say never lead with the place. Here the driving force is the reporter so lead with that. When a grizzled NY reporter is sent to Savannah to uncover a gay murder, he/she/they realizes they must fight throughRead more
Not bad! Certainly enough for a story is there. If you got a professional review, they would say never lead with the place. Here the driving force is the reporter so lead with that. When a grizzled NY reporter is sent to Savannah to uncover a gay murder, he/she/they realizes they must fight through the pleasant Southern facade to get the awful, unbelievable truth.
Not saying that’s it, but if it’s about people then lead with people. And detail the conflict. And never have a list!
regardless, if you’ve written the script already, one of the rare thoughts that easily has enough for a feature
See lessWhen an ill girl appears to be cured by his master, an young monk needs to fight his lust to keep on his enlightment path.
Not too many movies are sustained by lust. Have you seen Naked? It's lust - but broadly stroked. This seems rather narrow. No mention of love, what does the first sentence have to do with anything anyway? Wouldn't he be just as lustful if she was just there and didn't need to be cured? Needs more
Not too many movies are sustained by lust. Have you seen Naked? It’s lust – but broadly stroked. This seems rather narrow. No mention of love, what does the first sentence have to do with anything anyway? Wouldn’t he be just as lustful if she was just there and didn’t need to be cured? Needs more
See lessWhen en entomologist is trapped by local villagers, he must find a way out of the sand pit if he is to gain his freedom. – Woman in Dunes
Okay, thinking this needs more if you're going to sustain a feature. Either the villages just decide to kill him, or he is able to get out easily. Or not easily. But he needs more than just his freedom to get out, that's already stated. and why is it called Woman in Dunes if it's about a guy?
Okay, thinking this needs more if you’re going to sustain a feature. Either the villages just decide to kill him, or he is able to get out easily. Or not easily. But he needs more than just his freedom to get out, that’s already stated. and why is it called Woman in Dunes if it’s about a guy?
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