1. Posted: August 8, 2021In:

    After receiving an email to partake in a heist experience, an intrepid engineering student and his friends must work out how to rob a casino; but when they discover the heist is real, they must find the creators and expose them before they’re caught.

    NavCR Penpusher

    Wow. That is actually a good idea and the logline sounds good to me. I feel bad I can't help you much but I hope you can improve it. Thank you too.

    Wow. That is actually a good idea and the logline sounds good to me. I feel bad I can’t help you much but I hope you can improve it. Thank you too.

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  2. Posted: May 27, 2021In:

    A boy whose family was brutally murdered joins a squad of bounty hunters squad to free a community of women and children victims of a gang dedicated to making snuff movies.

    Odie Samurai

    Brutal premise – dig it. This version directly ties the filmed murder of his fam to the gang. “An orphaned boy joins a squad of zealous bounty hunters in order to seek revenge for the murder of his family by a vicious snuff film gang” Hope you find this constructive, take care.

    Brutal premise – dig it. This version directly ties the filmed murder of his fam to the gang.
    “An orphaned boy joins a squad of zealous bounty hunters in order to seek revenge for the murder of his family by a vicious snuff film gang”

    Hope you find this constructive, take care.

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  3. Posted: January 25, 2021In:

    An ordinary teacher faces war with alien warriors who wish to invade earth

    itso Penpusher

    Does it sound cool

    Does it sound cool

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