1. Posted: February 17, 2020In:

    In a plane hijack, a girl must sabotage her group’s terrorist attack, before she becomes one of them.   Diamond in the rough

    dpg Singularity

    Yep, confusing. Seems like she's already one of them.

    Yep, confusing. Seems like she’s already one of them.

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  2. Posted: December 25, 2019In:

    After a morally upright young adult is saved by a beautiful vampire from an attack orchestrated by his uncle to eliminate opposition to his rule, they work together to track down his newfound relative: the leader of the Vampire Hunters, but when the vampire gives herself up to save him, he must embrace his own inner darkness to rescue her before she is executed.

    Han_Heya Logliner

    Is his uncle the newfound relative?

    Is his uncle the newfound relative?

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  3. Posted: February 13, 2020In:

    A country footballer is on a quest to avenge his mother’s murder, find a missing woman and put his team on the road to premiership glory.

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    dpg Singularity

    A logline is a brief statement of? a plot.? The Greek philosopher Aristotle defined a plot in terms of a protagonist pursuing a singular objective goal.? Not two, or three goals -- but one overarching goal.? And that has been the working convention in Western drama ever since.So the logline needs toRead more

    A logline is a brief statement of? a plot.? The Greek philosopher Aristotle defined a plot in terms of a protagonist pursuing a singular objective goal.? Not two, or three goals — but one overarching goal.? And that has been the working convention in Western drama ever since.

    So the logline needs to be reworked to define one — and only one –? overarching objective.? Any other goal the protagonist has in the plot is a sub-goal, a milestone necessary to accomplishing the overarching objective goal.? And again, a logline is only concerned wit the overarching objective goal — not any of the sub-goals.

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